What the hell?!?! People come to perv on a site, and all of a sudden they themselves become writing critics? I get tired of reading all of the negative remarks and criticisms. If you can write a better story then do so otherwise shut up. You know what they say "those that can do those that cant bitch". Didn't your parents ever teach you that "if you don't have anything nice to say then shut the fuck up"? If you want a erotic literary site go to asstr. People edit their material there, and appreciate your critiques, if you have anything worthwhile to say. If you don't like something no one is forcing you to read it in fact no one is forcing all of you complainers to be here at all. Why don't you all take yourselves somewhere else and whine to each other. I'm tired of you guys fucking up my good time. I put up with bullshit all the time I come to places like this to escape not read all the hate and bile that you people have to spew. Instead of talking about how everything is wrong or broken why don't you fix it or do it right yourself? Show us what you have. Prove to us that you can produce something better. Otherwise keep it to yourselves. I could probably rant about this topic for another hour or so but i don't intend to write a book here so i guess ill step down off my soap box. To those of you out there posting real or not keep it up and congratulations for having the sack to post whether they be your own real life experiences or some fanciful make believe story it still takes more balls to post what you have than all these anonymous posters tearing what you wrote apart.
Willi Filler
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Wow! Dumbass bitching about other people bitching. Real super smart guy this one is.
i notice the few remarks are all anonymous as usual
Willi Filler
If you are writing, make it believable.
There was a story where some loser wrote about drugging his daughter and pressing his dick to her (remember, she's passed out) mouth and she licked it. Another, where a dumb-ass claimed that he enjoys licking a dogs "taint".... WTF is that? Another where a brainless dork claimed he buys tampons, opens them, jacks off on them and puts them back in the package and back on the store shelf. Absolutely no concept of tampons at all.
If you are going to write.... KNOW THE FUCKING SUBJECT.
Just because you are contributing does not mean you have open license to be lazy and stupid.
